This week we went on a hunt in the playground to see if we could find some feathers. We didn’t find any but luckily our teachers had collected some so then we came back to class and wrote about them using our senses of sight and touch to describe them. Here is my work:
Kia ora Leighton
ReplyDeleteTino pai tuhi! great writing! I really like how you have carefully chosen ideas to write about feathers. My favourite line is "Every bird wears them"
The presentation of your poem stands out with the colours and images. Ka pai!
One thing I think you could improve on next time is to make the title a bigger font. Keep up the great work.